Here is my draft promo video - can I have your honest feedback, ideas for improvement please?
thanks! regards Candy
About Me
- Candy Tymson
- With more than 25 years managerial experience working with a large variety of industries and organisations (both large & small) my expertise is communication in business. The different ways that men & communication communicate has become a speciality. I'm the author of "Gender Games: Doing Business with the Opposite Sex" and am continually exploring how men & women can be more successful in the workplace.
1 comment:
Hi Candy, love it, well done, one of the better ones I've seen. It is real, heartfelt, simple and short.
Some nitpicking?
1. We can only read part of your sign
2. The background could be better. Somewhere warmer; where people won't be walking past.
3. The outcomes they will get from your program needs to be more specific
4. The opening shot, the still, needs to be of you. Also, an early shot of one of the audience: her expression could be taken as smirking
5. Finally, the really big one: much more impact if someone else, a client, says it. Has 10 times the impact of you saying it.
But, think is great, well done,
Cheers, Toby
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